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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter to end a great story. Thanks for writing and keeping up with it Snidne. =3 I enjoyed reading it.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice intense final battle. =3 I was confused for a moment, forgetting Mammon had that body. Now I'm wondering why they are so shocked at their daughter.
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another nice chapter, Snidne. I really liked the transformation part. >w< Mammon's gonna get his ass kicked. =3
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Aivon sacrificing himself for his love.
As always, I really liked the fight scenes. John vs. Mammon should be really great.
For a moment I thought Monica was going to die. But it looks like she can still be saved. >w<
As always, I really liked the fight scenes. John vs. Mammon should be really great.
For a moment I thought Monica was going to die. But it looks like she can still be saved. >w<
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29-31 were really awesome. The battle was great and intense. I really enjoyed the casting of the Phoenix Fire spell. I though John was going to die there for a minute. I was thinking "But...he can't die!" *gonk*
Up next, is the going to be a big battle with mammon? :o Can't wait to see what happens.
Up next, is the going to be a big battle with mammon? :o Can't wait to see what happens.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty intense battle between Elno and Aivon. For a second there I thought it was going to turn out the opposite.
I could see Elno's point in hating magic, but at the same time he should just hate the guy who killed his mom.
I enjoyed both chapters. Very well done. =3
I could see Elno's point in hating magic, but at the same time he should just hate the guy who killed his mom.
I enjoyed both chapters. Very well done. =3
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=O Battle stuffs...
I liked the psychological battle Hieas used, or tried to use. Jessica was pretty tough. I liked the ice spear part as well. Great chapter, Snidne.
I liked the psychological battle Hieas used, or tried to use. Jessica was pretty tough. I liked the ice spear part as well. Great chapter, Snidne.
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I feel Jessica won't beat Hieas. But, I could be wrong.
Nice descriptions, too. Can't wait for the big battle to take place.
Another great chapter, Snidne.
Nice descriptions, too. Can't wait for the big battle to take place.
Another great chapter, Snidne.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very nice chapter. I liked how each used a different element to defeat their enemies.
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had forgotten about Karin until I started reading this. It was good. I liked the fight scene. Midas needs to go back to his old self. His power is going to his head.