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by Darkplaygirl

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schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Writter, your nuts. Look over it again. Look CAREFULLY. I see no loss of meaning.
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy it but did you lose what you ment in an effort to make it rhime.
poetry dosen't also have to rhime in order to tell the story you are trying to say.
looking forward to your next one