rate_review Reviews

You'll have to forgive my mild dyslexia... But I won't pardon myself for it, especially for rude individuals like yourself who wouldn't know a proper review if it kicked them in the ass. As for the story itself, WHAT didn't you like about it? Give me some feedback... Theres no way I can get any better if I don't know whats wrong. Was it the formatting that bothered you? The way I progressed the dialog? The action script?

Also, you must have a sight problem as the story says in the title that it is a WORK IN PROGRESS~! Of course it's going to be a little off... Otherwise it wouldn't be IN PROGRESS. Please, all I ask is that if you give a review, give a proper review... Saying "Yeah, it sucked ass." isn't going to help make it any better.

Thank you.

that was strangely erotic...but anyways, good story and update it soon!

first of all u cannot spell.tongue not tounge. and thigh not thy. but other than your grammatical errors this story sucked.