rate_review Reviews

oh, wow! this story is honestly outstanding. during the first part i really thought it would end up being a kind of horror story since you conveyed a foreboding feeling so strongly, i almost expected a monster to come through the window from the intensity of the ominousness. when emily was brought in, i felt a lot of sadness... it was obvious she died, but then that way you told it, how she did it, was just heartbreaking. i also expected kevin to just give up after printing the story, but was pleasantly surprised when he didn't.

you really said so much in just one chapter. a lot of the paragraphs flowed like poetry; i had that feeling you get as a reader sometimes when you know that something has been said in its most perfect form and that nothing was concealed from you. the story beams with talent. i hope to see more from you again!