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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there's a lot, and i mean a lot of mistakes that you need to fix, but overall it was really, really HOTT!!!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niiice, i love it!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I lost count of their orgasms in the 'first' chapter alone. Good job.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot, even with all the ice cubes, lol. I enjoyed it. Maybe you could change the scenery and like move them to the bathroom, or even better, the kitchen. *grin*
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written, and very hot :)
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT! I can't imagine 5 ice cubes in the ass tho. Are they small ones? Still nice story. =)
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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