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for Take My Breath Away

by Bmoonwriter

person Octarus
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very intense! I loved Jenna's reaction when she first saw Drew. I thought at fist she had been shot, but that kind of suprise probably feels as intense as a gun shot! :P
person Alex
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love It!!