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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whohoo~ hot stuff man... Love it.. hope you can update soon... Your grammar and spelling is fine by the way
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this seems like it'll get better as you keep writing it. please continue. leaves cookie.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More,more and more.....please
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, there's a false grammar here and there but it's okay. Don't mind it. Don't think too much about it. Just focus to your story. That's what the reader is to be. They will tellyou and teach you. Keep it up and good luck
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. continue please!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot so far. update soon.
schedule
September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start!