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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like most your stories, it got better in the second chapter^.^ I can't wait to read more^.^
oxox
Torie
oxox
Torie
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please write another chapter, it seems like the start of a good story.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. I want to know what happens next.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's okay. A little hint though, check your punctuation, capitalization and perhaps extend your chapters a bit. They're so short it makes the story choppier than it is.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow thats hot I cant wait to see what happens!! please update soon!