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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start so far. to bad he's going to try to stay away, what fun is in that??? update soon.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i really really really like it i hope u update soon...they sound like they got hot chemistry together lol
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapter so far can't wait for more.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like I told you when i was helping you with this! I think it's a great story and i can't wait for more!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice premise for a story, but it has some grammar issues; you put in words that don't make sense. Nonetheless, I can deal and will continue to read the story, so please update this soon!