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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG how sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!!!!!! phew need a cold shower (tho if it were with someone, i'd be more satisfied...)
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I think this is a really great story so far and you should defineltey keep updating. It's a little too early to fully criticize you yet but if you keep going I'll let you know.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love when i find great stories like this:))
update soon i want to see where you take this
update soon i want to see where you take this
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i liked it i hope everything goes good witht them
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw just when things were loking up for them, now i hope because shes in the park nothing happens to her, hm.. wouldn't that be bad???
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i'm happy that you're going to let them explore this. I just hope that they can handle what comes after?? update soon.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw I really like this story. it's so sweet, because he isn't being too pushy and he is making sure shes okay with what hes doing. this is pretty much the only story i come back here and check for updates. I really cant wait for more! your doing wonderful making the characters come alive and not to mention making them easy to relate to. I love reading a story that I can drift into. UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Honestly I'm a sucker for a younger girl and older guy. I wanna read more!!!! James seems so sweet, and hey its only 10 years right? lol!!!!! Id do it if I was her, so go her!!! Update soon!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Start. Very Sexy.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
just to say i like your story it looks like it has alot of potential, looking foward to the next chapter. update soon
just to say i like your story it looks like it has alot of potential, looking foward to the next chapter. update soon