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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whooaa!!!!!! i would never have guessed that Jason would be a rapist by the way you described him, to me he seemed pretty normal. but, then again, i don't know much about rapists except...they like sex and that's it. but anyway, overall, good story and please update soon!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This guy reminds me slightly of ted bundy, that sly dog. Doncha just love how rapists are all like, "im gonna rape you now". that's like, you know, like like whoaaaaa.
yeah okay you get the picture
so right on i guess, but its a little frightening if you folks think this is TEH SEXY!!! or anything like that, cuz its real and rape and death are no giggling matter.
keep it real gangsta
yeah okay you get the picture
so right on i guess, but its a little frightening if you folks think this is TEH SEXY!!! or anything like that, cuz its real and rape and death are no giggling matter.
keep it real gangsta
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Theres nothing good about rape. I hope this story may help someone one day. i do want to read more.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. You ought to try doing more or lenghten it somehow next time okay?
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will update soon please!!!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start. can't wait for more. although i have to say penis sounds way to technical
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please go on
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story has an interesting premise. but it seems at the moment to just be a hook. i am looking forward to readin the rest as the hook has worked.