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for The Paradox

by Bhriste

schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still very, very good! (I get the impression we may both have seen the latest Rome show on The History Channel...)
person Sekre
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, how sad!
person Sekre
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor baby.
person silent_dreams0131
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must say I was plesantly surprised by how well you wrote this scene; not many can truly expression all of the emotion that it contains. I hope that you will update soon because I am looking forward to where this will go.
-Silent_dreams0131
P.S. I write "Truly Mine," another slavery fic, if you ever wanted to check it out ;)
person Sekre
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start - I would love to see how this goes.
person DrkDreamer
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful scene and so very well written. I adore the story.