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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What???? Proximo took Alecto, out in the middle of the courtyard? He didn't even bother to check and see if the little slave was alright? What a swine? And how did he find out Alecto's secret? Did someone tell him? If so, who?
Good to see you haven't abandoned this story...
Good to see you haven't abandoned this story...
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Aw...and I was enjoying this story too....
Guess I'll have to take a look at that other one you're working on now then...but please don't forget this one....Please?
Aw...and I was enjoying this story too....
Guess I'll have to take a look at that other one you're working on now then...but please don't forget this one....Please?
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
From what? May the gods protect him from what?
Oh, that is so mean to stop there! I just hope you won't be too long with the next update...lol
I mean, I need to know what Tertius is going to do to Alecto...Jealousy can bring out the worse in people, it's already made Tertius sell the one he loves...And what is to become of Aulus? Will Alecto ever see him again?
So just what did Florentina see in Alecto's future?....
From what? May the gods protect him from what?
Oh, that is so mean to stop there! I just hope you won't be too long with the next update...lol
I mean, I need to know what Tertius is going to do to Alecto...Jealousy can bring out the worse in people, it's already made Tertius sell the one he loves...And what is to become of Aulus? Will Alecto ever see him again?
So just what did Florentina see in Alecto's future?....
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I've missed the story...
Was thinking Alecto would be sold. And instead, Aulus is gone.
How will Alecto handle his life alone? Poor, sweet baby boy...
Was thinking Alecto would be sold. And instead, Aulus is gone.
How will Alecto handle his life alone? Poor, sweet baby boy...
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sad and wonderful.
(I always hope for a happy ending.)
Thanks!
(I always hope for a happy ending.)
Thanks!
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Why do I get the feeling that soon all is not going to be well in the life of Alecto? Surely it can only be a matter of time before Proximo finds out that Aulus has been enjoying his property? And what will become of the two lovers then?
Good to finally see an update...I'm hoping the next one won't be as long...lol..
Why do I get the feeling that soon all is not going to be well in the life of Alecto? Surely it can only be a matter of time before Proximo finds out that Aulus has been enjoying his property? And what will become of the two lovers then?
Good to finally see an update...I'm hoping the next one won't be as long...lol..
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was really beginning to fear you'd abandoned this story. So glad you didn't.
I'm a little confused about what happened between the last chapter and this one. Some sort of 'make-up' surely. Last we saw of Alecto, he'd been raped brutally and was bleeding. (I thought Aulus was an ass!)
Glad they had another tender moment. Proximo has to figure this out sometime.
I'm a little confused about what happened between the last chapter and this one. Some sort of 'make-up' surely. Last we saw of Alecto, he'd been raped brutally and was bleeding. (I thought Aulus was an ass!)
Glad they had another tender moment. Proximo has to figure this out sometime.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 review - what an awesome chapter. You captured the pain and the hopelessness of a slave in Rome so well.
And Alecto's strange bravery to face it without breaking down completely.
(I do hope Aulus is going to be sympathetic, though...)
And Alecto's strange bravery to face it without breaking down completely.
(I do hope Aulus is going to be sympathetic, though...)
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good....Are you going to continue it? I hope so...I'll keep checking back to see...
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is THE BEST original story i have ever read on AFF.