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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe that Mrs. Fisher (sp?) sounds like she could be a matchmaker. lol. That was a cute scene. Hehe I wonder what will happen next.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Flash fiend removes willowed veins welts marring ivory skin. Introspection in the long run, too lost before faded memory, underdone beneath the heal of our oppressor. Play and rewind.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, you know it wouldn't be a bad idea to get his viewpoint on things? But it's your story too. But that kiss was a fast one. lol. Keep it up.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to drop a line and say its a really good start to what seems to be a really good story. Keep up the good work and updates, I look forward to continuing reading it.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!! That's just hilarious! Oh! A rich and hansome guy? That's just too perfect!! It's obvious Jae has insecurities about herself. I am so looking forward to your next chapter. Keep it up! The only suggestion I would make is describing your chars better okay?
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I can understand. I have been trying to improve my descriptions of places. Describing people comes more easier to me. But you're doing a great job. I must say I was caught by surprise when Jae made that bold move. I love forward to any more surprises.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol nice. Poor thing. I sure hope you update soon.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. I drew me in right away and I couldn't keep my eyes off of it! What a cute nickname, Blue, but I'd probably get tired of it too. Jae almost reminds me of myself lol. Only it was all my cousins getting married haha. But at least I've found love now. I hope you update soon!