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by KayLove

schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww just when things were getting better, you have things get back again. hehe. But that's good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I get the feeling that things are going to get more interesting.
person J
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
favorite part of this story...her real name is Jordan (like me) and is called Jae (also like me) :)

i can't wait to read more
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That got to the point. And I know what it's like to suddenly change things and to get sudden inspiration. I wonder what will happen next.
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just when things were going fine, you throw another curve ball!! I love it!! I feel bad that Jae's in an accident, but I have a feeling this will really push Chase's digits. And it's a great cliff hanger!!! Please update soon or I'll go nuts!!!
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! Another suprise. hehe You're on a role darlin. I wasn't expecting her to have amnesia!! This is insane, in a good way though. Hehehe
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, congrats on surprising me for I didn't see that coming. Hehe I bet Chase is going to look into it too. I think you did really well here. Honestly.
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww poor Jae. I can't help but feel bad for Chase too. Hehe I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Ana
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hated when Chase said something like 'im a man i have needs' that line is so hackneyed and sexist. Other than that great story. I hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. Good for her for standing up to Chase.

schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's okay darlin. You just focus on getting better and getting your baby better.