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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was not only HOT but hilarious! i love the main character, i think she's one of the best female character i've ever read in a fanfic because she has such acool prersonality, plus i love that you made her a tomboy! but anyways, continue with this story cause it's so good!!!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and funny. I like it. Update please.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute start, should prove to be interesting to see where you take this.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really love this tory so far. please keep it going and update soon
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'...distractingly intriguing blue eyes that distract you from what I want hidden' lol what the hell?
Anyway, sentences like these speak for the rest of the story. I know you said it combines some elements, but there is no sense of the period. Setting is hardly described at all; one minute it's medieval England (I assume) and the next she's in some room with a poser. The characters so far are annoying. I don't get why they speak the way they do. Anyway, it's your first attempt, so look forward to reading more chapters.
Anyway, sentences like these speak for the rest of the story. I know you said it combines some elements, but there is no sense of the period. Setting is hardly described at all; one minute it's medieval England (I assume) and the next she's in some room with a poser. The characters so far are annoying. I don't get why they speak the way they do. Anyway, it's your first attempt, so look forward to reading more chapters.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is an awsome story. i can't wait for the next chapter to come out. please update soon. o wanna see what will happen next.
Ja-Ne =^_^=
Ja-Ne =^_^=
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was rather...strange, somewhat funny, and yet I still enjoyed it. Do continue. ^.^