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for Take On You

by acolytemask

person K.O
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! Another great story from one of THE best authors and it seems you are writing it without missing a beat! Best of luck on this and all of your peices!
person Cancan227
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's another HOT one!!!
person Passion_Flower
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't sure if I'd like the story, because of the length. I mean, the story has got to grab me within the first few lines, you know that sort of thing. But this was excellent! I loved the detail, finally a story about a young male student, being dominated! YAY!! I haven't found to many of those, not to mention good ones either. Please let me know when you add more chapters!!! HURRY!!!

Sarah;-)
person Fenrir
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOw...now that was hot! Great story, keep it up, and repost soon aight?

Fenrir