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for Take On You

by acolytemask

schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God i love this story!
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More?
person Jackie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, after reading her reaction to Kristen i expected Tiffany to like kyle as well. I can't wait to read what happens
person Canaan
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far. Can't wait for chapter 4. ^^
person Mev852
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty interesting. I'm liking where you're going with this. Its so different from the boy maid, yet there are similarities that I love.
person Hornymonkey
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming please!
person K.O
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems a lot like the H-Manga "Take on Me," which is sweet because I loved the manga!
person Toxical
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! awswome hehe, the boy reminds me of my friend hehe
and kristen reminds me of me,hehe. PLEASE ADD MORE! I WANNA SEE! lol
person ChrisDawg88
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter was really awesome. This story has tons of potential. Please continue soon!
person Phil
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!

I love this new series acolyte! :)