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awww this is adorable if not really sad at sum points. please write more i wanna see how it'll work out with the whole kid loving his father thing and what'll happen if he breaks it off with his current boyfriend i just can't wait for you to write more *huge smiles*

-Evil cackling- Finally, some father/son interaction. Yay... more chapters please! Look I was even a good little crazy person and left a review. So please!?!?!?!!

i really like this. I thought it was kind of ironic that your post showed after the rant on spelling errors in fics. LOL! It doesn't bother me after all no one claimed to be a professional. I am so glad Shikou is growing up and finding a new love interest. i thought we would have to wait longer for that development.

I didn't mind you adding my name to your MSN... i was actually kind of flattered. I'm sorry if you misunderstood what i said last time... heh. I still like your story, although Our little papa-kun is getting a little happy with a lot of people. And I ido feel bad for Ki Ki, he was sweet. Although with him out of the way...wow that sounds morbid.... better and sexier things can occur.

I like your story. Period.

I like your story so far. ithink my favorite part was the familial relationship Kiki, Shikou, and Yoshida share. It was very warm and the mama thing seemed pretty logical for a kid and it was pretty funny. I found some mistakes in grammar like using on when you meant in or "They had both said nasty things to each other; he’d never forgot that had cuffed him to the shower rail, taking almost everything they owned and jumping ship to Japan. " There are some words missing in the sentence so the reader isn't sure who is doing what to whom.

-Cries- Me want more..... NOW! And for some reason I'm not so hot to trot for Tsuki. I'm a terrible person... but I can't wait for Shikou to grow up cause I wanna know what e looks like. Hehheh. See no perverted reasons involved. Just wanna know how he grows up.