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for The Bar

by AnaisWannabe

person Niiro
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was unexpected!

It started off as rather...typical shouta, then eased into so unusual smut!! I likely!!!

Though I'm not a big fan of bars, but this was great! Loved it!
person srynoname
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your work!

It's always so creative and very very hot.

=]

write more please!
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, you know by now that I'm a big fan of your work, but I would like to make a suggestion.

I get the impression most of your young boys have not 'volunteered' for their abuse - though sometimes you give the impression they like it.

Guess what I'm asking for is a little more angst - give us some idea of how they got into their positions (pony, waitor, servant to corporate executives) and how they feel about it.

Although - for sure, I'll read and enjoy anything you write.
person Shiro
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm always thrilled to find you have posted new work. You write *hot* stuff! I like how you don't seem to hold back, no fear and no restraints, haha! Yay! ^-^

And this baby was no exception. Love it! Thanks for sharing your work!
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's hot!!

person Enir
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have you considered writing a sequel of your stories perhaps of subway or checkup? think about it please