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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fuck you are amazing. realistic characters with realistic tension and excellent prose to boot. i wait for the next chapter with bated breath :)
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh he's gotten drugged! :O
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...coconuts. Thanks for updating. Hope you feel better. Yah, it was cliché but sadly it still happen. Don't leave your drinks unattended people!!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lease please update
i cant wait to find out what has happened. and what of michael the waiter??
i cant wait to find out what has happened. and what of michael the waiter??
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chapter! Keiichi singing drunk and then passing out was hilarious, and I wonder what Mark is going to do now. Hope to see more soon.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW This is really good! Very disturbing at times, but still very hot! I've grown very fond of your lead chracters, even the psycho Mark. Keiichi is hilarious btw.
Can't wait to read more!
Can't wait to read more!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more and more !
:)
PS the chapters should/could be a bit longer :)
:)
PS the chapters should/could be a bit longer :)
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your Amber's character ! She SO funny !! She's nature and selfish !!
I think Jack put the drug in the glass... But why ??
Marcus is going to play to the doctor ^^ !!
I think Jack put the drug in the glass... But why ??
Marcus is going to play to the doctor ^^ !!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, just give up on italics, please. but i looo...ooove the story, & the title, i could never forget it. even though it's kinda rascist in a black panther way. card:I hope you get well soon. xoxo
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
last week someone put a drug in my sisters drink and she almost died