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for The Devil has Blue Eyes

by ThePhantomSockPuppet

person kubomi
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was just thinking of this story the other day, wondering what the hell had happened to it!

I guess it didn't help that I could not remember the name of your fic, and the only details that popped into my mind were Amber wearing coconuts and being a funny bitch, and Marcus driving a mustang?

So.... now that you have gotten yourself a means by which to update your fic, I do hope that you will be updating a bit quicker than this last wait? Pretty please?

Keiichi is just so cute when he's all drugged up, and I want to know what the heck is going on with Mark! How did he end up obsessed with poor little Kei anyways?
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this is really interesting...I wonder whats gonna happen in the morning when he realizes he just said i love u? Please update when you can, I cant wait for your next chapter! keep up the good work..8D
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story blows me away! I never expected it to flow the way it has. Mark confuses me and Keiichi confuses himself. XD. I can't wait for more of this.

Amber's bitchiness amuses me. I didn't like her at first but she certainly has grown on me.
person miles
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! Poor K ! I really hope for him it's love and not just lust ! Mark seems very possessive, especially when K says "I love you" to everybody !!!
Perhaps he's not going to remember the next morning... Anyway, I think he's going to be angry...
Can't wait for the next chapter...
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one of the hottest sex scenes i've ever read.congrats!
poor keiichi,he'll be sore.
person Stank You
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well my word, an update. I have this story favorited and I clicked it thinking it would still be chapter six but I was proved wrong. Damn, this was a good chapter; I mean a really good chapter. I can just see the angst in the later chapters. You really made my day with updating this chapter. I feel really at peace right now. Thank you. And I hope you come into some money soon.
person Stank You
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost forgot...I was sooooo excited when I saw my screenname at the end of your story! I felt so important!!
person miles
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm SO happy that you update !! I saw that just now ! I'm going to read your new chapter now... SSSSOOOO happy ^^
person Sekre
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, how cute? x) Poor Mark - he was obviously trying to restrain himself.
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update please