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Well, I decided after a long time to check if I did somehow happen to miss an update and I actually did. So, I wanted to say it was a great chapter and that I hope you plan on continuing the story!

More importantly, I wish you well and hope you are feeling better :)

Still so much love for this story. <3
I have read it like ten times.

love this story!!!!!!!

Please, please tell me you plan to continue this because I just spent hours trying to find this story and then learning that Chapter 8 will explain more about Mark's obsession with Keiichi! AH! Excitement overload!!! Gah... It's probably masochistic of me to root for Mark to get Keiichi since he made such an ass of himself getting into Keiichi's pants but he somewhat redeems himself in Chapter 7 by at least trying to not take advantage of Keiichi. Then again, I'm a real perv and wanted him to take advantage anyways... especially since Keiichi *finally* made the first move. Of course I was hoping he was in a different state of mind... but I take what I can get... "Perverts can't be choosers" as they say.

yoou'reee killing me with the cliffhanger! Best story on AFF at the moment ! ! !

I read all the first seven chaps in one sitting and I gotta to this is pretty good it literally had me on the edge off my seat.

Sexy.

Hopefully there is an update around the corner.

I just found this story and i'm up to chapter 4 and i have to say wow, this is awesome. I love the characters and how the drama is unfolding.... Thank you so much for sharing...

Lol, I put up a couple of demanding reviews and poof! update! I love your story and how realistic your characters are ... (update?)
:P
;)thank you

I found this story today and read my way through to chapter 4. I decided to stop and leave you a review before I have time to continue to the next chapters.

I like this very much and I am glad to have found it! :) Mark is quite confusing character, so all this time he's had a crush on Keiichi or obsession for him? And that's why he bullied him? Well in a twisted way it would make sense; after all he's gay, doesn't want people to find out and then "accuses" K to be what he himself is. Then he rapes him, is kind again, helps him and rapes him again, uh, he is confused alright. Perhaps he hopes that along the way Keiichi will fall for him as well?

And Keiichi, supposedly straight but I think he is bi, who hasn't allowed himself to explore these feelings, being 'in love' with a girl who is so out of reach for him; Amber's supper model sister, who I think he knows he can't never have so it's sort of save to have a crush on her and not explore his own deeper feelings and desires further.

He was slightly interested of Michael too, right? Oh oh, which reminds me that Michael seems definitely interested of him as well and I wonder what will happen there.

So Keiichi shows some small waking signs of interest for Mark, also fear and disgust, but there is an interest there and then there's this Michael.

Perhaps Michael ends up saving him? Or somehow Mark repents for his evil doings and I dunno... they can develope some sort of relationship? Though I wonder if K could ever trust him enough to let him become more to him, after all Mark has totally ignored his willingness or lack there of.

Hm, okay, I think I should just read more and wait patiently to get answers to these questions ^_^


-kolgrim-