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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this and I'm already hooked!
I love the banter between Amber and Keiichi. They are so funny together; the way they talk to each other.
I'm wondering what's up Marcus' ass; why is he all of a sudden picking on Keiichi?
Ok, off to chapter two. Oh, I'm sure you probably answered this already, but how do you pronounce Keiichi?
I love the banter between Amber and Keiichi. They are so funny together; the way they talk to each other.
I'm wondering what's up Marcus' ass; why is he all of a sudden picking on Keiichi?
Ok, off to chapter two. Oh, I'm sure you probably answered this already, but how do you pronounce Keiichi?
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of the available chappies. I really liked what I read so far, can't wait for more :)!
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five: Jack is too funny! Invite Keiichi and his red-headed big-titted friend. She'll make all the girls cry and then you have a better chance of scoring when you comfort them. What logic! lol
Oh, I had a question from the first chapter: why doesn't Keiichi's mom cook for anyone but herself? That's really strange. She's not like a traditional Japanese wife then? Who caters to her family, especially her husband?
Loving this story!
Ok, on to chapter six! :)
Oh, I had a question from the first chapter: why doesn't Keiichi's mom cook for anyone but herself? That's really strange. She's not like a traditional Japanese wife then? Who caters to her family, especially her husband?
Loving this story!
Ok, on to chapter six! :)
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seven: It's so, so scary having to watch out for crazy people drugging your drinks. Seriously, who would do that? Sick people. I never heard of Sexstacy. Is that how it's spelled? Jesus and you went thru this shit. Wow. Thank God you're ok.
I wanted to point out that watching TV with the sound off and listening to the radio/CD/computer/whatever, isn't just for people who are stoned. My roommates and I used to do it in college all the time when we studied. Well, tried to study....attempted to study, lol. We were sober and not high.
Oh, I just wanted to point out two minor typos: you've used aloud a few times when you mean allowed, and strait is straight. That's actually the only misspelled word I've seen consistently.
Anyway, awesome, awesome story! :) I'm sure Keiichi will regret saying those three little words to Marcus in the a.m. IF he remembers saying them!
Ok, onto chapter eight! :)
I wanted to point out that watching TV with the sound off and listening to the radio/CD/computer/whatever, isn't just for people who are stoned. My roommates and I used to do it in college all the time when we studied. Well, tried to study....attempted to study, lol. We were sober and not high.
Oh, I just wanted to point out two minor typos: you've used aloud a few times when you mean allowed, and strait is straight. That's actually the only misspelled word I've seen consistently.
Anyway, awesome, awesome story! :) I'm sure Keiichi will regret saying those three little words to Marcus in the a.m. IF he remembers saying them!
Ok, onto chapter eight! :)
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH I finished chapter eight and realized THERE ARE NO MORE CHAPTERS TO READ!!!!! Boo, hiss, boo, hiss.
Awesome chapter. You have me going thru so many emotions regarding Mark. First I hated him for what he did (raping Keiichi). I mean if you really like someone, raping them isn't going to get them to like you at all. One would think.....but then....Mark was being so nice at the party, offering to stay with Keiichi in the room, and then taking Keiichi to the motel. And then......I felt so sorry for him having to live with two parents who are drunk and/or fighting with one another constantly. I was actually afraid Mark would revert back to his aggressive dominant behavior as a sort of defensive mechanism; I guess the only way he can cope with them. Now I'm thinking that his aggression towards Keiichi this past year may be directly correlated to his parents. Maybe his parents have started fighting over the course of the year, and the only way Mark can deal with this is to act out. His acting out is his aggression towards Keiichi. Well, of course he also likes him, so that's why he's singling him out instead of some random person. Also, his aggression and dominance are things he can control. When he's home, he feels helpless with his parent's situation. He has no control over their actions so the only control he has is when he's harassing Keiichi. So now I feel sympathy towards him.
Anyway...I really hope that since you're halfway through chapter nine you'll stick with it and update soon. Now that I'm addicted to this story. :)
Awesome chapter. You have me going thru so many emotions regarding Mark. First I hated him for what he did (raping Keiichi). I mean if you really like someone, raping them isn't going to get them to like you at all. One would think.....but then....Mark was being so nice at the party, offering to stay with Keiichi in the room, and then taking Keiichi to the motel. And then......I felt so sorry for him having to live with two parents who are drunk and/or fighting with one another constantly. I was actually afraid Mark would revert back to his aggressive dominant behavior as a sort of defensive mechanism; I guess the only way he can cope with them. Now I'm thinking that his aggression towards Keiichi this past year may be directly correlated to his parents. Maybe his parents have started fighting over the course of the year, and the only way Mark can deal with this is to act out. His acting out is his aggression towards Keiichi. Well, of course he also likes him, so that's why he's singling him out instead of some random person. Also, his aggression and dominance are things he can control. When he's home, he feels helpless with his parent's situation. He has no control over their actions so the only control he has is when he's harassing Keiichi. So now I feel sympathy towards him.
Anyway...I really hope that since you're halfway through chapter nine you'll stick with it and update soon. Now that I'm addicted to this story. :)
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! I can't believe it !! Thank you ! Thank you !
You're back ! I hope for a long time ! :))
I think Sydney suspect something...
And poor Mark has a really weird family T.T
You wrote nothing about what Mark think of K's love declaration...
I can't wait for more...
You're back ! I hope for a long time ! :))
I think Sydney suspect something...
And poor Mark has a really weird family T.T
You wrote nothing about what Mark think of K's love declaration...
I can't wait for more...
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey there just wanted to say, great story. AND
I've seen a lot of storyies taken down or Authors warned cuz thex answed to many reviews in their story.
I don't want the story down so I'm just saying you should probeby answer the reviews in the Forums?°^^
I've seen a lot of storyies taken down or Authors warned cuz thex answed to many reviews in their story.
I don't want the story down so I'm just saying you should probeby answer the reviews in the Forums?°^^
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!I caught up and seeing how the other chapters took years I'm scared but it's too good to stop reading *cry*
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesomely sexy!! crazy at first but so emotional later on.
Love it!! keep up the updating!! lol. I love the drunk video part. crazy funny!
Love it!! keep up the updating!! lol. I love the drunk video part. crazy funny!
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that people don't like Mark being possessive but damn is it hot. I want to know what kind of erotica was written about little keiichi...I just...this story is AMAZING!!! Keep up the wonderful writing and don't worry I can afford to wait if the updates are like the ones you have dished out. I have no complaints about this story!!!!