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for The Devil has Blue Eyes

by ThePhantomSockPuppet

person Jackie
schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG yes an update you just made my day!
person DNight
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG MICHEAL IS MARKS BROTHER O_O oh crap
person Sarkukka
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This's really nice fic. I actually found it when you updated the chapter eight, and I was a little worried if you're going to keep us hanging. But apparently not! Thank you for that!
I'm a bad person and I laughed when Mark told about his step-brother's jokes. No wonder poor Mark's a little traumatized.
And I have to tell you that their ecstasysex was really hot! Well done! Hopefully Mark'll get a snif of Keichi's twist with a riding crop.
Thank you so much for the update!
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your story has completely hooked me! Is there an update list I can be added to?
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and man am I liking it.
I really hope you post soon!
I can't wait till you explain everything.
I'm so cerious!
Well hope I'll be reading more VERY soon :D
person anu
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
did not see that one coming
person Talltree-san
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! So many juicy things to look forward to :D!
person amyl
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! So glad to see this story continued. Soo much development in this chapter between Mark and Keiichi! Anyway I wonder how their relationship is going to progress now that they've shared that night...I feel like there are probably some issues that still need to be resolved considering how Mark started it without Keiichi's consent. Anyway excited to see what you write next, thanks so much for the updatee
person DNight
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this story i really feel sorry for mark even thow he did not deal with his desires all that well glad i i checked this story out ;-; don't take to long to update plzzzz hugs
person spex
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?? NEW CHAPTER??! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT???? I truly thought this was abandoned. I have re-read this story like a trazillion times! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING! I haven't even read the new chapter yet. I just had to say this. <3