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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like your story,
though Marcus is a bit too agressive to my taste
though Marcus is a bit too agressive to my taste
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....whoa! He did it again that son of a bitch! This chapter was worth the wait I suppose. I'm sorry about you ADD, my best friend has it and I cannot begin to think about all the times I've had to pull her ass out of something because she became too distracted. I feel bad for her. But I will not hold that against you because this chapter was excellent and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im in love...or is it lust...oh well im in it deep!
new chap soon or ill drown
new chap soon or ill drown
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story so much.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this isn't going to be a story where the victim ends up falling in love with the rapist. Those just drive me nuts.
I hope that eventually Keiichi will report Marcus, though who knows how much difference that would make given the amount of money and influence Marcus' family seems to have. Though even if he thought the guy would be punished, how inclined would he be to make in public knowledge that he, a male, was raped. Especially considering that it would likely become major public knowledge.
I just hope that Keiichi ends up getting past Marcus, that Marcus is punished, and that Keiichi will find some who'll be good for him.
I hope that eventually Keiichi will report Marcus, though who knows how much difference that would make given the amount of money and influence Marcus' family seems to have. Though even if he thought the guy would be punished, how inclined would he be to make in public knowledge that he, a male, was raped. Especially considering that it would likely become major public knowledge.
I just hope that Keiichi ends up getting past Marcus, that Marcus is punished, and that Keiichi will find some who'll be good for him.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is actually brilliant. I love it so, so much. =O Please update soon! ><
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! The waiting was long but that was worth !!
Pretty good chapter !!
Mark is really a bastard !! But he's in love, is he ? However, if he want to win k's heart, raping him is not the best thing to do !!
Or perhaps it's just lust...
Can't wait for the next chapter !!
Pretty good chapter !!
Mark is really a bastard !! But he's in love, is he ? However, if he want to win k's heart, raping him is not the best thing to do !!
Or perhaps it's just lust...
Can't wait for the next chapter !!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. this is a brutally realistic depiction of a rape victim, with his dissociation, confusion and shame and blind trust and mixed feelings even.. it is really, really rare to read a story (especially on here) where an author writes about rape and keeps it honest and doesn't shy from any after effects. the story overall is well developed, but i'm especially impressed by your talents with realism. fantastic writing.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This is an extremely great story! I feel so bad for Keiichi! I want Keiichi to like Mark! It's so sad! :( lol, I feel bad that Keiichi's getting raped too -_- I don't think that that will help his relationship. And, Mark should be nicer. Meaniehead. lol, but I really like this story, It's funny, sexy, and cute at the same time! I hope you update soon! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far!! Please update it soon!!