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September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This will never be updated will it? This is ones of my all time favorite fics I've read on any site and it's not been updated in four fucking years. Another all time favorite, one that was actually completed-~Evening's with Christian Lauth~ Disappeared from Arrin Fantasy. Its so sad. Iive in hope that this story gets updated though so periodically come back to reread and check. Always the same though, no update. Although with there other story I've at least found the author (maybe) and hopefully she'll upload her masterpiece.
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September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! I love it, I hope you update is SOON.
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September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a nice story! Please please update soon! :)
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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Where are you ? Please don't stop the updates...
:))
:))
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap you updated LOL! Ever since a story I really loved got ressurected I started checking out my other "loved but dead" stories in (usually) false hope. So glad I checked yours! I haven't even read it yet just wanted to point out that I'm a reader from way back and I'm very glad you haven't given up on this story and writing in general. I remember you mentioned/wrote something about health issues- i hope you're well in that regard :)
Off to read it!
Off to read it!
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story ^v^b
I read through all of it in one day!<3
/patiently waits for your next update!
Noticed some spelling errors: ( just ctrl+f to find maybe =D )
Ch.1
Mark was, for some reason, aloud to wear his silky blond hair...
*should be > ... allowed to wear his silky blond hair
Ch.2
You’ve wandered into my territory now, and if you make a scene and embarrass me in front of the sons and daughters of mommy and daddy’s rich friends and I will destroy you.
*should be > ... daddy’s rich friends, I will destroy you.
*would actually be better if (but i'm no grammar nazi XD) > You’ve wandered into my territory now. If you make a scene and embarrass me in front of the sons and daughters of mommy and daddy’s rich friends, I will destroy you.
Ch.4
Mark Stevens had raped him wile the rest of the school was downstairs at lunch
*should be > while the rest of the school was downstairs at lunch
He though that once he got through the doors...
*should be > He thought
Ch.5
So, who all is going?
*should be > So, who's going? *or could be > So, is everybody going?
Ch.7 (i think someone mentioned this already, but C= )
I'm scarred!
*should be > I'm scared!
but strangely and Earth shatteringly exciting
*should be > but strangely Earth shatteringly exciting
Ch.8
He soon realized he needed more friction and grabbed the bottle of lotion
*should be > He soon realized he needed more lubrication and grabbed the bottle of lotion
(**if he needed more friction he shouldn't put lotion ;3 )
I read through all of it in one day!<3
/patiently waits for your next update!
Noticed some spelling errors: ( just ctrl+f to find maybe =D )
Ch.1
Mark was, for some reason, aloud to wear his silky blond hair...
*should be > ... allowed to wear his silky blond hair
Ch.2
You’ve wandered into my territory now, and if you make a scene and embarrass me in front of the sons and daughters of mommy and daddy’s rich friends and I will destroy you.
*should be > ... daddy’s rich friends, I will destroy you.
*would actually be better if (but i'm no grammar nazi XD) > You’ve wandered into my territory now. If you make a scene and embarrass me in front of the sons and daughters of mommy and daddy’s rich friends, I will destroy you.
Ch.4
Mark Stevens had raped him wile the rest of the school was downstairs at lunch
*should be > while the rest of the school was downstairs at lunch
He though that once he got through the doors...
*should be > He thought
Ch.5
So, who all is going?
*should be > So, who's going? *or could be > So, is everybody going?
Ch.7 (i think someone mentioned this already, but C= )
I'm scarred!
*should be > I'm scared!
but strangely and Earth shatteringly exciting
*should be > but strangely Earth shatteringly exciting
Ch.8
He soon realized he needed more friction and grabbed the bottle of lotion
*should be > He soon realized he needed more lubrication and grabbed the bottle of lotion
(**if he needed more friction he shouldn't put lotion ;3 )
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey Shinju, just checking in to see if everything's ok. You were updating like mad and then you stopped. So I guess this is just a little poke, poke, hint, hint in case you forgot that you need to update this most hella awesome story. :)
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one thinking who the heck is Micheal.I can't remember him can someone like email me who he is or something,sorry.
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol ! Anne, the maid ! :))
You're right it was a mean cliff !
But, two updates in one week !? I forgive you ! lol !
And I can't wait for more...
You're right it was a mean cliff !
But, two updates in one week !? I forgive you ! lol !
And I can't wait for more...
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how excited I was to see chapter nine!
And omg Michael is Mark's half-brother?! Didn't see that one coming! My mouth was hanging open when I read that.
I wonder why Michael got kicked out? And by whom? Certainly not their mother; she's too happy to see him.
And why didn't he seem that shocked to see Keiichi?
Awesome chapter! Anxiously awaiting chapter ten! :)
And omg Michael is Mark's half-brother?! Didn't see that one coming! My mouth was hanging open when I read that.
I wonder why Michael got kicked out? And by whom? Certainly not their mother; she's too happy to see him.
And why didn't he seem that shocked to see Keiichi?
Awesome chapter! Anxiously awaiting chapter ten! :)