rate_review Reviews

lovely. <3~ a little short tho, woman. write more!

I knew it. Damian probably knew all along that it was Az. He was leading Az into a false sense of security so he can do him. XD That's what I think. But...

Goddammit... You can't stop THERE! Not there of all places. I abhor cliffhangers. ABHOR them. And when things were getting good, too... >_<

Your story is great. I'm enjoying it a lot so far. The only problem I see is that dialougue is a little confusing when there are more than two characters involved. It's hard to tell who's speaking. Keep up the good work!

*choking you* HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT...THAT.... EVIL CLIFFI! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON you you hmf. (pweas *big..BIG pappy eyes*)btw:loved it!!!!!!! ^^

Oooh, how cruel! And you kept me waiting, tsk tsk (lol)! Great chapter, update soon please!!!!

this is getting more and more interesting. you have to update soon.

Ohh, that was nice! I liked the way you made Az freak out, when he came talking on the phone (and his opening line was brilliant)but I liked it even more when whe fights with his feelings, then gives in to Damian, pretending he is a girl and expecting the older brother won't remember a thing the next day - and then he hears his name from Damian.
There were other lines that I liked, but my absolute favorite is from the chapter 1: "All. Thump. Fucking. Thump. Day. Thump." I am a visual person so when I imagined it, I couldn't supress snigger.
On the whole job well done. Go on with it.

You tease! All these wonderful hot fantasies, and it isn't finished! I would encourage you to continue ;)

AHAHAHA ! I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE WOMAN. . . *CACKLE* I STILL GOT TO SEE IT BEFORE EVERYONE ELSE <3 Gay love ~~

Hahaha, busted yet again!