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for Brother, if You Love me, Smile

by Suikou

person HinoiriMaiden
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh my, I really like where this is going. There's going to be quite some interesting interactions between the two now. ;)
person teeta
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

and thank you for the new chapter. It was ... *grinning* yeah! You really make me wonder how much will Damian remember, you know, flashbacks and so on. And ... he jumped Az when he was drunk and what about now? I mean people don't jump one another if there is nothing to it. So ... what about Damian? We know that Az has a thing for him, we knew this from the first chapter, but we still know nothing of Damian's motives. I am dead curious about that.

The chapter was really hot ^___^ and Azzie running away from Damian made me laugh so hard. Thanks for the chappie and hope to get more from you.

teeta
person Laaerie
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK... I got to say, I just told to read this story, Teeta told me :D and OH WOW!!! reading it all in one seat sure gets you err... the right idea of the story (hahaha) I like the sotry a LOT!!! I'll be one of your faithful readers now! so you'll finde me bugging you for updates too... It was interesting to see Damina lucid-not-really-lucid hehehe... and well... nice all in all!

Laaerie
person Yuu
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Love it!
person teeta
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(runs to wipe the blood inder the nose)
Ok, I'm back ... Ooo, that was really ... Is it me, or it's too hot in here?
I can't wait to see what happens comes morning. What will Damian remember from this night's events? And most importantly - how will he treat Az?
Please, update soon!
person Spiritfoxgirl
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dies of a nosebleed* FUCKING HOT.
person Sekre
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hawt... and drunk my ass xD
person boring_neko19
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! The sex come! Evil me! I love it. You're the best. Looking forward for the next chapter but I wonder if Damian really loves his brother and not just toying him. Well, maybe it times for a little plot. Kidding.
person Sekre
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, smut :) I bet the aftermath is gonna be a bit awkward xD Especially since I'm not sure how damien feels on the matter ... kinda seems like hes just humoring Az, -giggle-
person teeta
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that was hot. Really hot. I like this a little forceful Damian. Can't wait to see what Az will do.