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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was a fun ending. It's like 'wait... he was supernatural all along?' ^___^
I'm glad he ended up with Lucifer. And he asked a very good question. He didn't ask "would you give up your throne to me and let me rule", because that would not be equal. He did not ask to be pampered and coddled like Lucifer was some sort of demonic sugar daddy, either. He just asked if he would be allowed to let go. The best possible question.
I also liked the worm bit **laughs** it's like 'here's your worm, kukukuku....' 'eeeeeeeew, not literally! **throws worm back**'
also, lucifer sounded very... loveable. as odd as that sounds. I love the small details, like the fact that his eyes are brown, a perfectly normal color. Good job! A very fun oneshot ^_^
I'm glad he ended up with Lucifer. And he asked a very good question. He didn't ask "would you give up your throne to me and let me rule", because that would not be equal. He did not ask to be pampered and coddled like Lucifer was some sort of demonic sugar daddy, either. He just asked if he would be allowed to let go. The best possible question.
I also liked the worm bit **laughs** it's like 'here's your worm, kukukuku....' 'eeeeeeeew, not literally! **throws worm back**'
also, lucifer sounded very... loveable. as odd as that sounds. I love the small details, like the fact that his eyes are brown, a perfectly normal color. Good job! A very fun oneshot ^_^
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I am not one to reveiw one shots normally but this story was just so unbelievably adorable I had to tell you I loved it. I loved the way you left it tp the end to reveal that Setheus was returning home to his beloved. Just all around a great one shot!
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