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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that even though it's a very lengthy story, it is a very GOOD one. I started reading and just could not stop. I love the characters, I love the plot. It was very well written and incredibly emotional. I truly enjoyed it and can not wait to read the next to installments (hopefully a bit shorter lol). Great job, great work, keep it up.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have now read all the stories in the 'Brothers' series that have been posted (hopefully so far) and so am commenting on all of them at one time.
I have to say that I just love these types of stories. Lovey and smutty with a bit of angst and a hell of a lot of lemon juice in between!
I don't know why but I've always had a fixation with two hot brothers going at it since I first came onto this site. Blame MorbidxDino ^_^ with 'Past meets Present' and 'Double the Fun'. Damn those stories were hot.
Anyway, write some more with these two brothers and I shall be extreeemely happy, love the style of the writing and love everything in it. Gotta love Jake, he's so lovely besides the fact that he was a cheating bastard. Can't stand adulterers.
Yeah ... I think that's it for this review. Has to be the most disjointed one I've ever written. Probably because I'm hung over (thinks of 'The Fag Palace' chapter) heeehee. Too much sake.
So, just write more for me please. Otherwise I'll cry.
darkangel1210
I have to say that I just love these types of stories. Lovey and smutty with a bit of angst and a hell of a lot of lemon juice in between!
I don't know why but I've always had a fixation with two hot brothers going at it since I first came onto this site. Blame MorbidxDino ^_^ with 'Past meets Present' and 'Double the Fun'. Damn those stories were hot.
Anyway, write some more with these two brothers and I shall be extreeemely happy, love the style of the writing and love everything in it. Gotta love Jake, he's so lovely besides the fact that he was a cheating bastard. Can't stand adulterers.
Yeah ... I think that's it for this review. Has to be the most disjointed one I've ever written. Probably because I'm hung over (thinks of 'The Fag Palace' chapter) heeehee. Too much sake.
So, just write more for me please. Otherwise I'll cry.
darkangel1210