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That blows

You have five days to update before I send my self organized mafia to hunt you down and force you to. The power of the people united! Okay, no really. It has some grammatical problems, seems to flow too quickly, but I love it all the same. Don't change a thing.

Chapter 4. Sure it was embarrassing to do with your friend (I hope you don't mean it literally- I mean, you know where to stop, right?.....snicker,...snicker...) , but it payed off- Chapter 4 is so hot that I stil have steam pouring out of my ears, Gee. Roleplaying does seem to work really well, it makes things more realistic and good for dialogue especially. I still need some kind of explanation as for how Joshua had fallen in love with Derek so fast, I mean, just today he was suffering from long time broken hart- with the girl!, and now 180 degrees turn and he loves a boy! Right after the said boy had kissed and praised the feather. Maybe demons and angels are more compatable than angels and people. It sort of like Anime, they just hint at things and live you. I mean it in a good way, being anime fan myself - love my eye candy!. Written stories just need more detail. But then you guys probably have it all figured out. I can't wait till the next chapter, thanks so much, Shadowcat.

Chapter 2 - Awww. This is cute. Very cute and fluffy. I'm a little surprised at the fact that little Joshy kissed him first. But it was cute!

Chapter 3 - Hehehe Which balls do you like best! How naughty! I liked this chapter. Cute and fluffy like the rest. I expected him to find out later about the angel thing but whatever I guess you have something else planned for your lovely characters. Hmm so does his demon side come out during sex? That would be hot!

Chapter 4 - Aww. If only Yoru was Derek with all that sexyness. Update soon!

Yay, Derek is back ... The scene was hot though xDDD

Interesting ... I wonder what will happen now.

Hey, Shadowcat, thank you for the fast update. I still like this story but it was slightly too fluffy. Too sweet. Joshua seems to be controlled through his feather, so was the kiss genuine? Derek is the Demon,right?

Hahaha, stupid Amber.