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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that your writing is very good and I hope that you continue this story all the way through. Good luck and you a new reader in me.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. it's awsome!!! plese update soon. i wanna read mooooooorrrree!!!!!!!!!!
Ja-Ne =^_^=
Ja-Ne =^_^=
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!! I LOVED Chapter 2!!! You didn't dissapoint me! YAY! hehe This chapter was as good...no WAY better than the last one and that's saying something cuz that one was amazing too!! ^_~ lol ...I seriously can't wait for ur next update!!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...first let me begin by saying that that demon...well the best way to say it would be through a song by The Divinyls released in the 80s, if you catch my drift. The plot is really beginning to thicken and take shape in this chapter, and I must confess that it has left me intrigued and desperately wanting more. I'm glad to see you're really taking your time with this story and not settling for anything even remotely mediocre. Keep up the excellent work.
Until your next chapter,
TARO-SAN!
Until your next chapter,
TARO-SAN!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont make me hurt u!! o.O!~
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that is one bangable demon! Your story is excellent so far. Your attention to detail and imagery is superb; it makes the story vivid and easily imaginable. I also commend you for your impeccable grammar and extensive vocabulary. I am looking forward to future chapters and more work from you. Have you ever considered writing yaoi or slash? Just a thought. Keep up the great work!
-TARO-san!
-TARO-san!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!Oooh!! I can't wait to read more of this story!!! Sounds incredibly interesting to me!! I'm loving the character's description!! Hope you add another chapter soon! ;D
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally addicted already. theres gotta be more
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES you should continue! Its really good so update SOON!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Very good start! Write more soon! :)