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for Kiss of Temptation

by fallenangel99

person RagingRaven
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There always have to be the tempting ex.
-sigh-
anyway great job.
person Taro-san!
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot...twin...demons...must more be said? And I did love the in depth description of the setting *cough cough* castle fanservice *cough cough*. The character of Delilah makes a lovely addition to the cast too. She's definitely hardcore dom (dominatrix)! Well you continue to supply the online world with hot angel/demon stories, and I have no complaints, but I do have a small request...can the demon twins have a love scene? Just a suggestion. Because that would be hot. Keep up the good work!

-TARO-san!
person maccam
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated. i beleive he can defeat Noir, he has a love of an angel. please write more.
person maccam
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why did you stop it there, tease!!! more please!!!
person Jell-O-lover
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love your story!!!! you have great discription, i really could imagin it all....:)
person jisAtsU_siLENcE
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your idea!! i hope you update again soon!! great job
person bebe
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is a wonderfully written story. i hope that you write more soon
person Angel
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the tension and how they came together...great story
person miles
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah !! Tnanks for this chapter ! It's very good... Can't wait for the next !
person Wandering Thought
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reading this story, I cannot help but marvel on your ability to flow from one scene to another, as well as the brilliant imagery and good choice of words. I really like the writing style here, and I would be impatiently waiting for the update ^^.