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for Peridot Eyes

by silverbell01

person Alli
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I don't think you know what "crack fic" means. Did you mean PWP? Because that's what this was.

Anyhow, it wasn't bad. I don't know why you have a one. You had some spelling errors in the beginning but you didn't later on. The story is abrupt but as far as the writing goes it certainly wasn't terrible.

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