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Its too bad about the misunderstanding at the end. It would have been nice to see them start being friendly towards each other.

An exciting and very promising tale! I really liked your detailed accounts of the places, as well as your ability to distinguish characters and liven up their personalitites. Once you update, I'll most definitely be there to continue reading.

I noticed that it sounded a little like Inuyasha but its still very creative overall.

I love it, especially the part at the end.

This is very original.

Nice chapter. i'm starting to love this story with every chapter you put out. i can't wait for the next chapter to come out. please update this story REALLLY SOOON!!!!!!!

Ja-Ne =^_^=

This is descriptive and well written. Good job.

Hello Hello again from the land of Woo-Woo! Oh what can I say about this chapter...um very descriptive,hilarous if u imagine yourself in Lasha's shoes doing the victory dance, personally I wouldn't mind being in her shoes when Fang had up against the wall, I tell you I could feel the heat from him by the way you've described him in the fist chapter and that scene you don't have to write it,read it, or see it to know that there was some sexuality there...oh was there. Sorry bout that, once again your a great writer and I can't belive I didn't remember you at first you write another story I'm intested in 'Night Tide' I think that's it. Really great, great characters even the redheaded heiffer who is 'not fat just curvy'. God I love that,but you ended it in a cliff hanger how could you, your evil! I"m still going to read this anyway. I look forward to the next update and happy hunting to you.
Oh has Lasha never seen The Ring?! Surely she would know not to ever look inside an old dark well under a building. Oh well that is what makes the story great but still she needs more movie sense for that.

cool chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon.

Ja-Ne =^_^=

Give me more!!!!!!!!! I love it! You give alot of detail and I love that too. Oh and Fang! My god you couldn't have come up with an even hotter God! He soo fine or rather sounds so fine. Hey can't bet mixed bloods espically if a part is Native American,passionate,moody,overprotective,territorail,alpha male type you know. Let's not forget badass either which Fang possess all those wonderful and annoying qualites plus he has white hair so that makes him all the more yummy. You did wonderful! Kyle is already getting on my nerves, oh well Fang will show him (luv that name).

Lasha love her too, and I'm glad that she isn't a skinny blue eyed perky blonde. You gave the girl healthy lustful curves which it it is true men can't go without thinking of sex for more than 30seconds. Me want more! Pwease update soon!