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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Oh. My. God. Here I am, my face getting closer to the screen with each sentence, captivated and freaking out at the secrets and the untold stories and the possible dangers. And then, at the end... o.0
I know of no better way to relieve anxiety and tension than screaming in laughter until I cry. Thank you for that. This story is growing beautifully in leaps and bounds with each new chapter. I'm absolutely, completely, and totally addicted.
I know of no better way to relieve anxiety and tension than screaming in laughter until I cry. Thank you for that. This story is growing beautifully in leaps and bounds with each new chapter. I'm absolutely, completely, and totally addicted.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, man!
This is amazing stuff, here. You've got incredible talent at moving the story along at the perfect pace and you're incredible at your character's development and how you display their emotions.
Great second chapter, I'm loving this.
This is amazing stuff, here. You've got incredible talent at moving the story along at the perfect pace and you're incredible at your character's development and how you display their emotions.
Great second chapter, I'm loving this.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really just getting better and better. I can't get over how perfectly you develop your characters and reveal just enough to hint at quirks without making them shallow. It's really great.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am DISGUSTED!... that you have so few reviews.
Got ya!
I really enjoyed this first chapter. You had a way with subtly developing the characters without drawing their personalities out in that omnipotent 3rd person writing style. I really enjoyed it.
The sex could perhaps use a bit more detail, but there is passion in it.
I really hope the rest of it is this great! Keep it up, man.
Got ya!
I really enjoyed this first chapter. You had a way with subtly developing the characters without drawing their personalities out in that omnipotent 3rd person writing style. I really enjoyed it.
The sex could perhaps use a bit more detail, but there is passion in it.
I really hope the rest of it is this great! Keep it up, man.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@1: this is a real piece of work. for a guy, kind of romantic. I got all hot and bothered, so you must uv done sumpin right. Thanks
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a bastard to take advantage of her like that. So what happened to him, is he in jail??? what's up with Michael, why is he acting like an ass****. i can't wait for more :) thank you!!!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, what a guy. i'm sadden about his parnets. now that we know about him, what about her???? update.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!! keep it up i cant wait to read more!!!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How much more can they keep this up???? wow another great CHAPTER!!! I hope something will come out of this, not just them doing it all the time???