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for Reaching The Stars

by Omicronus

schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy, you are an amazing writer. Its intimidating really...
Yeah, I'm still working my way through it (I have to share this comp with five other people, eesh) but I really like it so far. Ah, and this is silly but eggs with parmesean cheese is absolutley killer and my favorite way to eat them. Bravo to you.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm on my way out but I just wanted to drop this and say I love the first chapter! You're fab. I'll definitely be back to read the rest :D
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAhh you stoppesd? dont stop keep going more more. on a more sane note this story is wonderful atfirst i thought it was moving a bit fats but eventualy i realy couldnt care less. i realy only heard about this story becuase i read you review for Cinderella Pizza and im glad i did and i hope you up date soon
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Oh, you're good. And here I thought it was a harmless, though slightly twisted, love story. I should have known better.

FYI - you've forgotten to close your italic code. Check the last half of your story.
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Andarius stared at her like she just damned him to Hell.
“Anadeema is finally home.”

o.0 Don't tell me she's been there before. Or, better yet...who is she replacing?

I have a really bad feeling about this. I'm of two minds here. There's no room for maybe. She'll either accept the alternaverse completely or run screaming in the other direction and hate him for it. I'm curious to see her reaction.
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Oh...you tease! *snicker* Well...I guess I'll have to come back, won't I?
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* Such chemistry! Whoo! Jack and Christina are a perfect match. Mmm.
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Jack.
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fun chapter. I love it. “I’ve never had black before…” -- LOL! How cute is she?! Such a nice threesome. Perhaps they should get sloshed together more often.
person Mina.Rose
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Kevin. Such a bastard. I hope he suffers, excruciatingly slow, every single day for the rest of his life.