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by Hippiechick7897

person AvalonAvenger
schedule March 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You still around? Love this story as it plays into my lesbian cuckold fantasy....I really get off on imagining my GF being seduced by a dominant lesbian behind my back and getting her ass tongue-fucked hard and deep :) Pity there wasn't a sequel!
person bob
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a three way would be hot
person Kate
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot, I have to admit. Looking forward to chapter 2. ^x~
person Jo
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is this story was amazing! Please write more.
person Lady Rei
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. The small plot line was different... I loved it! Write some more! ^^
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. I want more! I like these characters and your writing style.

By the way, I think you were missing a few apostrophes in "each others" at the end. Another quick proof-read might catch those. Just letting you know, in case you want to fix them. :)
person Elle H. M.
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THREE WAY! I vote you post a second chapter with the maid of honor. You know, so she doesn't feel left out...cause that would be bad. Plus, my head is spinnig with the possibilities, and that is never good. It'd really be better for everyone if you would write another chapter, so that I don't have to rely on my imagination. It tends to get me into a lot of trouble...
person Butt-Goblin
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. The idea of a 3 way is very good. I would love to see more ;).