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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It was very original and very well written. It would be fine to end it here, or you can add a couple of more chapters if you'd like. Either way, very nicely done.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write really well, keep updating!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes i'm interested. what a great story. wow if i could only be so lucky like that. i really can't wait for the 4th chapter!!!!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bahhhhh!!!!! you claim that the 3rd chapter is written...... update SOOOOOOON! it's a good story and i really enjoy it. don't leave me hanging too much longer!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delicious!!! Your story describes everything very well, down to every detail...
I hope to read the next chapter as soon as it comes by.
I hope to read the next chapter as soon as it comes by.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa ...that was HOTT! i'm gonna check out your other fanfics if they're as good as this.