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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update again. its awesome
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing acolyte. You would definitely have to be my favourite author on this site and this new story of yours is no exception.
I don't know if you can lol, but you reckon you could somehow incorporate a ... indian guy to have sex with Amy/Beth/Shelly? It's a fetish of mine. :D
I don't know if you can lol, but you reckon you could somehow incorporate a ... indian guy to have sex with Amy/Beth/Shelly? It's a fetish of mine. :D
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ths ws very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. Never have I ever read such an awesome story.
I love the length of each chapter. You must have put alot of effort into your writing.
Keep up the good work and update soon. I dont want this story to die off.
I love the length of each chapter. You must have put alot of effort into your writing.
Keep up the good work and update soon. I dont want this story to die off.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue please dont stop
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH RAH! Thank you aco. You added an asian woman, thank you thank you. Sorry like i said earlier fetish..LoL...well the rest is really good. I love it, keep it up. And hope repost doesn't take to long. If you need a pre-reader or something like that, don't hesitate to give me a ring or something. Thanks dude.
Loyal fan,
Fenrir
Loyal fan,
Fenrir
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lovw that you continued this! couple mistakes here and there, you called dave chris in the second story, but it still has the greatness of the first one!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dave and beth? more than hott! i hope there will be more of them in the future. as for chris keeping secrets. someone is being naughty.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like both this story, and the original Boy Maid story. I actually stayed up reading the whole original story last night after work, lol. One thing though, near the beginning of this chapter you wrote that it was during the break in the school year, but at the end Amy and Chris do their homework for the next day a school. Kinda nit-picky, but I figured you didn't write this all in one sitting, so it's easy to make that sort of mistake. Keep up the good work.