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for The Boy Maid Returns

by acolytemask

person BZLF
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall its a well writen story. Sorry if I've not reviewed before now. I've just got a question though:Shouldn't he have caught or given an STD after all the women he's had sex with?
person l'etje
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going an,d post soon
bye bye
person That Person, y'know?
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn man, you really know how to right about this stuff. Your pretty good, very suspensful might I add. The slave collecting part, very tabuu >.<. Might I correct something, prostate is a thing only people of the masculine sex have (lol, google rocks xD). I can relate to the boymaid somewhat >.> feminin little body, weak >.>, into femdom. Lol! Anyways! Keep up the good work! can't wait to read your next story!

Always loyal.
Chris.
person That guy Y'know?
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, don't pay attention to my last post x.x it kind of fucked up and did something totaly screwy. "I can kinda relate to Chris, feminin body, weak, into femdom." Thats what it was supposed to say >.<
person Butt-Goblin
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Really awesome story. Really!
I cant wait for the next part. PLEASE write more, you've got a great talent.
person MirrorKnight
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a way to end such a hot story. I look forward to the next story in the series.
person Negi
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never reviewed before, but I really love your fics. I just feel bad for Chris now that he was raped. IT was so sad... I hope you don't end this story on such a sad note. I really love this fic, and it would be a shame to give up on this fic because of Alicia.
person l'etje
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this was very very good, very intents
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person cbsnes
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't see that coming at all. This series has been very entertaining. It appears that the next chapter will be the last one for this series. Please post whether or not there will be another sequel. I certainly hope that there will be another one, it would be a shame to have the series end on such a sad note.
person MirrorKnight
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. I hope it doesn't end in sadness.