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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot, its a shame theres such a lack of such talented authors in this section
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Keep updating!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i really liked it . it was real hott lol well hope to read more soon
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it!
I feel though that Devon should be a bit more loving.
It would be totally sweet if they fell for each other head-over-heels in love.
I hope you write more, this could be a nice sap story.
Or that could be it.
Either way it was beautiful.
Nice crafted.
Ashleigh.
I feel though that Devon should be a bit more loving.
It would be totally sweet if they fell for each other head-over-heels in love.
I hope you write more, this could be a nice sap story.
Or that could be it.
Either way it was beautiful.
Nice crafted.
Ashleigh.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no wonder I liked this story. Once I saw that the author was you, I realized why it was such a damn well written story. I read the first chapter a while ago and wasn't sure if it was my thing. But the way you continued it on really nailed it for me. It was incredible. Once again, I just can't explain its attraction...
Keep up the awesome work, I cant wait to see more.
Keep up the awesome work, I cant wait to see more.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I kinda wanna see them get together. Seems like he wanted to be with her before, but couldn't. Maybe after some begging and "convincing" *wink wink* Alicia will take him back? Makes for more fun. :)
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like these type of stories where the man gets lightly tortured without all that extreme stuff...
I like this...
I like this...
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Anticipation is a wonderful thing. I was a little disappointed they never actually resolved their lust though.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like it i hope u continue the story