rate_review Reviews

Call me crazy but I find the thought of someone having boobs 25 feet long to be quite a turnoff. Tala wouldn't be able to walk, much less do much in the way of pleasing men. Furthermore, if a girl is being degraded as much as Tala is, having her thrown into a dumpster while she gives head is pretty sick, in my opinion.

My problem with your writing is not that it involves the degrading of women but that a.) none of it makes sense, b.) you pride yourself on a respect for women you have yet to give any examples of in your work, c.) you turn rape and degrading women into some big joke. I wouldn't be so bothered by this if you portrayed some of your men as cruel or heartless, but you don't. You make everything the woman's fault, and any woman who doesn't want to be a sex object is a stupid bitch.

May these women you "respect" never read this story.

You know, I like your stories because they are hilarious, disgusting and hot all at the same time(don't know how that happens, but nevertheless), but seriously, you went a bit far with the Lucas and Lily chapter - I had to stop reading and go to the next chapter, it was just too much. Other than that I'm liking this story, but stay awayyyy from the child pornography, it's wrong. And I mean wrong in the most unsexy sense of the word possible! In fact, it would be a lot better if you completely rewrote that chapter and changed Lucas's age to be somewhere in the 16 and up area.

Man this story gets sexier still! Don't listen to Jack Dawg, this story is amazing, keep it up! I hope to see more soon.

You're fucking with me, right? Oversized anime breasts, meh, I'll deal with on occasion. But 10 foot breasts? Go get fucked.

Amazing story, some of the sexiest stuff I've ever read! More I demand more of this story!