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for My Guardian Devil

by VolitileFire

person drew
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahaha!!!I loved the ending! Next Chapter! Next Chapter! Next Chapter!
person D.O.A.T.
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter hope you update soon
person Luna
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I loved the third chapter! Sucks you can't update 'til around late November though =\ Just like...speed through your college work or something :P

<3'n the story.
person The Watcher
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So cool another chapter. And it just gets better. I agree with Luna: Speed through the work!!
person Laenael Ellaia
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! PLEASE update. It's soooo good. I am very pleased with it!! Especially since there is only one thing you need to work on. Just be a tad bit more descriptive. ^^; NOW
UPDATE! *Cracks whip.* :p
person ~instert some witty name here~
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. The main character is dead...does that mean the story is over or is she gonna crawl out of the dumpster?
person animereader1
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude, at the end when that other dude said she was dead and then you said i'm not dead....i think my brain just died. Thanks for the update!
person The Watcher
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! It's okay about the description part. Hopefully the next chapter is as good as you say it is. Update soon.
person ThunderHeart
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story!! Cant wait for the next chapter^.^
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good sorty so far, I like it alot. I hope you will continue this story soon.