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for My Guardian Devil

by VolitileFire

person RWO
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
think this is the third time i've read this story. one of my favourites actualy.
i'd like to read that ''other story'' sometime, the thought just gets me every time i get to the end of this one.
person KimM
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOooooooOOOoOoOoOoooo! Its over T__T
But it was SOOO good!
I really can't say anything critical about it! I can see it all happening, and it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time.
person Unknown Alex Fan
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending! A bit sad but then great ^^
A perfect story.
Good luck in future works ^^
person Di
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! yet im kinda sad its over great action!!!
person Alex
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....lets rape the poor vamp. *chuckles* Well done. It took you an entire year to release the last 3 chapters, but now that it is finished, i somewhat forgive you. Nice job, i hope you do just as well on Second Chance. Later!

Alex
person Elly
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say...That was an amazing story! That last chapter was AWESOME!!! The fighting scenes were great, the last scene was great, everything was great!!!

Good luck on your future works.
person Di
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Very good and yes, I'll be mighty sad when it ends but I'm dying to know how it ends too! ;)
person thetaintedrose
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha how can I not review? Or re-read? or... well, you get the point. Each part of the most recent chapter delivers that action... whether its the passionate kind or not! I'll be digging around your other stories in a few minutes hahaha! And trying to figure out what I wrote to deserve being mentioned XD
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD I lost this story for awhile but here you are updating again! Goodchapter and I can't wait for the last. ^^ You did say it was the last right. Haha. I can't remember.
person Elly
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you started out with a HOTT scene especially how it was in the airplane! That was totally genius of you. I love how you used the italics. They were hilarious. I love the other hott scene. Good chapter! Keep writing! :D