rate_review Reviews

Wow... again I must say, you're EXTREMELY good at making the story mirror reality. Every detail just seems so believable. It's easy to relate to Tai even if you've never been in that situation b/c you make it so real. Can't wait to read more.

Chapter 1 (Tai's Chai) - First, I absolutely love the title. Second, the plot so far is fucking awesome. Third, the music is an awesome touch. And fourth your lemon scenes are Godly. And jesus fuck I love your names. Ajenia and Tai. It sounds like an aphrodisiac. Their personalities are so raw and in-your-face already that I know I'll end up loving this story to pieces.

Chapter 2 (Magenta Marinade) - Oh my fucking God. I love this story. FUCKING LOVE IT. A lot. I mean the first chapter counts, you know, sort of. The reader has to want to read the second and like the first. Which I did. A lot. And then you read the second chapter and it's like well it has to match up to the expectations of the reader and very rarely does it surpass the readers' expectations but it surpassed mine. But OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS AWESOME! Love it love it LOVE IT! Wooo! Sex in every chapter? YAY!

Weeee are the champions Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee are the champions... of the world

I'm really enjoying this story:) Although Riley sounds like a waste of Tai's time to me. But then, I really can't talk, my friends have said the same about some of the guys I've been mixed up with. I'm very curious about Ajena(I can't remember how you spelled it.), he's a very curious character. Makes me wonder what his story is, and why he's so pissed all the time. Also why it took him so long to confront Tai about the book. Does he like Tai? Why hasn't he been in the coffee shop lately? So many questions. Please update soon :D

LOVE IT, it's really good, the descriptions are so well done, please contine this fic and update soon

Mmm, can't wait to see more. =) Update soon!

Awesome. Your righting style is amazing. Everything seems so real. Can't wait for an update.

Some really awesome writing. Your descriptions are just amazing - felt like I could actually see the whole fucking sequence. (Meantin the best possible way.)