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Wow, this is a great story! It's so realistic. I just hope that Tai realizes he should get rid of Riley before it's too late. Ajenia(sp?) is so cute when he is upset and all ruffled with 'injured pride'. By the way was Ajenia ever in jail b/c he seems to have the characteristics I think one would have after being in jail for a while. Please continue!
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Imogen Heap, Zebrahead, good stuff, good stuff

I love love. I really like the thought of actually having to FIGHT for something you want instead of just getting whatever. I'm glad that 'magenta' isn't a slut, that would make things a lot less interesting. Poor tai, I feel so bad for him

I really like this. It actually a very compelling story that has very real characters in it. Both Tai and Ajenia are very confusing, but I think it's cute how Tai keeps trying to make friends. I look forward to reading more.

geez, tai's self worth is taking a nosedive, isn't it? poor guy, he deserve better. and i'm still focused on his hand, i keep expecting him to randomly faint or just break out into a dangerous fever. wonder if ajenia has any medical skills ;) btw speaking of him, i LOVE his name, and he is so sexy! i wonder what it'll take to break that hard shell of his. hopefully tai will find out, and dump that asshole riley in the process.

i'm so SO happy you're still writing this. WAY too many great stories are abandoned around here. it's wonderful when a talented author sticks around :D

That's it. I'm going to murder Riley. First I just wanted to cause him some harm. But now? Oooh, Golo, the boy be DEAD.

*starts making a grocery list*

Otherwise, I don't see why you disliked this chapter so much :( I can feel your apprehension in it, tho. Just think of it as a hurdle that needed to be toppled over and kicked XD Push FORWARD, dearest Minion!!

And... fist... guh. *shudders and hugs herself tightly* Just the THOUGHT of that. You write the horrid WONDERFULLY... Girl after my own heart, you are. *cling* Keep the fisting perverts AWAY, Golo! AWAY!!

Hey *perks* art idea!!

Anyway, keep up the good work! You shall rule a continent soon, dearest Golo XD

No more hospital stays, tho, ok? Don't want a sickly minion :( Makes me sad.

*huggle* LOVE YOU!

your story popped up in my head today; i've read a great deal of fics here but yours stands out in my mind and is particularly memorable. i hope you continue writing it because it's one i've enjoyed very much so far. :)

I just found your story and I'm absolutely in love with it. Update soon. =(

-cheers- AWSOME!! AMAZING!! I would wait forever to read your completly great, funny, smart, sexy, and to die for realizm story! Like i said be for, "im following this to the end". And it doesnt matter how long it takes. Its your (beautifully written) story. Just the way you put the music in is so clever. Like nothing i ever read before. I should stop before it looks like im kissing ass. Oh, before i forget-- i went back and re-read the chapters and noticed that even in the beginning it seemed that tai was all-ready losing interest in riley. In the first chap. tai didnt come from riley's "actions" but by jerkying himself and watching riley's fice when he climaxed. And in the second he was mad at riley for comming in his face, but come to find out that he really didnt know why he was mad. I most likely sounds like i was studying your writting lol. P.S. Keep up the great work!

AHHH! Its a new chappie! -jumps up and gives you a big hug- yay! This one was awsome! I would come back from the dead just to read it! Your writting is just that amazing! I was just worried you might have dumped the wonderful story like so many other people i know. Even myself. Im just so happy to finally see a third chapter! Keep up the out of this world job!

Yay! An update. Still as real as ever. I deffinately want to know when you update. I really love this story and your style of writing. Can't wait for the next update.