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for Marie and her Daddy

by MadameDouleur

schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF!? What, were you cought writing this or something? Man... that fucking sucks!
person Nanio
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, I just discovered this story and now it is gone? oh poo, I hope you write more great stories like this one.
person Daddy
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would also like to add my apology for not getting the story finished. Unfourtunately life sometimes deals us a bad hand.
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn I feel light headed. Monthly time for me and I have bad cramps yet I'm now turned on. Fantastic so far!
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A few grammatical errors but still a terrific story! If we could have favorites again this would be posted as one of them.
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read each and every chapter in this story and loved them immensely. I'm sure I speak for a lot of your loyal readers when I ask: "Why? Why are you not going to continue with this story??? Can you give us a reason--PLEASE???

Does this mean that you are not going to write at all anymore or just not this story? Sorry for all the question marks, but enquiring minds want to know...
person Angry and horny
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont like fics that say minor in the content codes, only to discover it is a 17 year old. I WANTED MINOR! not 17! the people who get attracted by the minor content code dont care about what is barely legally a minor!

Sheesh this is born not a court of law. Next time just make the girl 18 and dont bother tempting me with your lies!
person Xander
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Realy like this story, anymore chapters?
person Maria
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm, keep up the good work, you're keeping me very wet! :)
person Lxshr
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the next chapter.