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for Good Business

by ladygodiva

person just here
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More i want to see what happens
person isolde
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
promising begining. this could turn out great...if u continue.
person McNeal
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to say I'd like to know more about the group. I'm so into your other story--which should be updated, and have a little more smut/detail--that I'd like to read more on this one.
person Sam
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES you have to continue.. its not an option not too. j/k PLEASE UPDATE
person na
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good scenes im not to hot 4 the incest tho.. but another chapter wit jake and the other girls would be fine.
update soon!
person sminty
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just one word. Hot. I love sibling incest fics. Especially ones with plots. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person EnchantedFairy
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet. I think you did an amazing job. You really described the uncomfortable position Jake was in to a T! Not wanting to jeopardize his job, but also not wanting to admit that Felicia was his sister...and having her come up with a quick solution of the blow job vs. sex. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person shagmedraco
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lord that was disturbingly hot! im almost ashamed that i found that hot, but i did. i'd love a sequel, with the three girls and jake, or just jake and felicia..